
How bright do you burn?
Flames flicker at your surface,
Yet never dimming.
Temperature so hot,
Even the strongest,
Would turn to ashes
In your atmosphere.
Even so, light years away
You sustain life.
Your rays light paths
Walked by both man and beast.
Without you,
Life would fall into darkness
And then into death.
Still, at such great distance,
Your beams burn our skin.
Starting a fire
That spreads like cancer.
How powerful you are,
Floating ball of fire,
Burning light of life and death.
And its getting nearer by the minute…
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That it is!
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A wonderful poem in all respects
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Thank you! ☺️
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Lovely
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Thanks! Thank you for reading!
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It’s a pleasure
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Beautiful words ! Could feel the warmth
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Thank you so much! 🧡
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Nice one!
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Thank you, June!
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I enjoyed your poem almost as much as I enjoyed the sunshine on my Mediterranean beach today.
Thank you for following Sound Bite Fiction.
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Thank you! 💙
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I read this almost as a call to people to become the brightest star they can. Left alone, the amazing prose here beautifully depicts our Sun and its monumental impact, both positive and negative, on our world and its own beauty.
Under the surface though, I read this as encouraging people to let their lights shine bright enough to lift others up, encourage them, and give them strength, without blotting them out or causing them harm by trying to shine so bright.
Either way, a very, very beautiful piece. I think you knocked it out of the park with this one!
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Thank you, Jordan, for sharing your take on this! ❤️
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Beautifully penned, Alexis ♥️
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Thanks as always, Shweta! 💕
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Cool!
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Thanks!
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