
There’s a familiarity
In the coldness
Of the space between us.
A ghost of my past
That I once felt.
My fingertips have traced
Lines on phantom skin
Once before.
Never did I think
That skin would become yours.
Spirits of past haunt me still.
Maybe this space is
Simply a gap
Of my own creation.
My fear that the same flame
Will burn me twice.
Only this time from
A much hotter fire.
My fear is that our demons
Will refuse to coexist.
Our fires will merge
Until we turn to ash.
Maybe you don’t see that.
My fear is hidden
Far behind my eyes.
You can’t see the destruction
That so easily comes to life.
I see it.
I feel it.
It terrifies me now.
Visions of what
May never come.
Be still,
Let me lead you
In my nightmare.
See what I see
Now escape with me.
I’d say I’m speechless because I am a bit, but that wouldn’t do justice to the beautiful piece you’ve created. Such powerful language that clearly comes from a deep place. The emotion in this one is really strong and so poignant, but it leaves a window of hope and happiness at the end.
It’s difficult reconciling demons, but it isn’t impossible and I hope you don’t give up. As you say, the fear of something that may never come can overshadow a bright future just over the horizon, so even in the rough times, keep your head high, and try to find the bright spots in the dark clouds. Amazing and beautiful piece, excellently done!
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Thank you! ❤️
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Fucking fire! Love this piece
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nice
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Powerful stuff. As Jordan says, the window of hope – escape – is a good counterpoint at the end. There is always hope.
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Thank you! There always is ❤️
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Very powerful🌹
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Thanks for reading!
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My pleasure
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That’s one hell of a nightmare! Beautifully written ❤️
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Thank you so much! ❤️
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This was beautiful! 💙
Also I just noticed the symmetry between your name and your blog name :D.
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Thank you! 💙
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Very profound! Love this!
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Thank you! 🙂
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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I’m not sure what to say…Jordan took what I would’ve wanted to say right out of my mouth…I think the poem is beautifully, and emotionally expressive. The message is positive and the language evocative…anyways, I hope you don’t mind that I dropped this here https://thepoetspeace.wordpress.com/2020/06/30/sunshine-blogger-award-3/
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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oh you are dipping into frightening territory here. you are so brave!
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Thank you! 🖤
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